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This was going to have a much more epic background...

after :iconomegarain: has made me a few tasty drinks, I've become a LIIIITTLE tipsy, and have gotten a little lazy with it, but it still didn't turn out so bad.. :3

Just a sketch I had when I was in class....and this is the end result of it...was planning on adding a trail to it, but the final lineart didn't turn out so good, but meh. It turned out okies :3

Enjoy! <3

Dawn and Diana are my characters from my webcomic, Code Black, found here: [link]




*goes and drink some more awesome* X3

Critiques


:iconberrixkisses:
Ok, to be honest with you, the first thing that caught my attention was that the rabbit ears on the girl with darker hair (sorry I don't know your characters T.T they look interesting enough to get to know, though!) seem a bit awkward. I think it's because of the flat, straight on position and the simple shadows... The rest of the drawing has much depth & dimension - particularly the use of textures - but those ears feel...awkward. xD; Maybe if you used texture, or made the white a little darker...?

But aside from that, I really love how well this piece is composed. I like the play on symmetry and switched colors on the outfits... plus the graphical background is a very nice touch. <3 Need I even mention how gorgeous the dress designs are, too? Classy. Sweet job!
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:iconspacyg1:
Love the outfits!!

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:iconkeitarou7:
o.o woah! This came out really good! The background is simple, yet effective and I love the outfits both Dawnie and Bunry are wearing. Great Job! If this was alcohol induced, you should get tipsy more often! XD

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:icontwinsnake-coatl:
Looks classy. The umbrellas are a nice touch.

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:iconshadowoflight01:
those are really cool outfits! <333
:iconhandxpalm:
I really like those outfits, they're very adorable. I actually do want an outfit like that XD

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:iconroswell619:
Wowee!^^Very cute outfits!^^

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:iconzldamstr:
Yay! That's so awesome! They're like cute twins! :D

And the background's fine! lol ^_^

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:iconyamidawn:
Thank you! It's actually funny, Bunnry and myself are usually called twins by strangers in real life all the time XD;

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